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Cruel Beauty

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You watch a beautiful pink eel like creature in the distance. She seems to be all alone, just swimming there in the open. It's a Pokémon eat Pokémon world and you see your chance in an easy catch. Slowly you swim closer to her in hopes of making a meal out of her; you though make sure that she isn't seeing you coming. She just sits there as if she is teasing you but you just shrug it off. Inch by inch you get closer and she doesn't seem to notice you. You then get close enough to her to open you large jaw to devour her, quickly you snap open you jaw.

The pink Pokémon quickly turns around and before you had a chance to snap close your jaw she stabs you with her sharp thin mouth.  It easily pierces your scaly skin and you yelp in shear pain. She slowly pulls it out and stabs you again, this time though was different. You slowly feel your life slipping away and you notice that there was no blood in the water from when she stabs you.  Everything starts to fade away as you struggle to free yourself. It was to no avail, she wasn't going to let you go.

As you continue to slip away into the darkness she lets you go as you sink. You couldn't tell but it looks like she was mocking you and laughing. You would have never believe sure a frail looking pink Pokémon could do that to you.  She then readies herself for another attack and stabs you once more.  You have no more strength and just lay there waiting for the end. It was then when you notice what creature you had stupidly try to make your meal, it was a Gorebyss.

"Don't ever underestimate me, just cause I'm beautiful. Although it's too late for you to learn now, isn't it?" the Gorebyss said in a mocking tone as she stabbed you a final time.

Slowly you fade away into the darkness just wishing you listen to your peers, stay away from any Gorebyss for they are only to be watched for a distance. Damn it they were right but still how can something so beautiful be so cruel?
Contest entry for :iconin-worldpasta:.

I thought it could be cool to see if I could so a pasta under five hundred words, thus this came along because I do like a good challenge. So yeah I'm just doing this for some fun really, yay :dummy:

This was somewhat inspired by this pokedex entry:

"Although Gorebyss is the very picture of elegance and beauty while swimming, it is also cruel. When it spots prey, this Pokémon inserts its thin mouth into the prey's body and drains the prey of its body fluids." (Sapphire)

And what Pokemon attacked Gorebyss, that is all up to you to decide :meow:

Pokemon (c)- GameFreak/Ninetendo
Story (c)- Me
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Zoeyangelina222's avatar
i reallly dont know